This one has a really good start but it became annoying as it goes on eversince the introd...

Gynnn May 5, 2025 6:41 am

This one has a really good start but it became annoying as it goes on eversince the introduction of that damsel in distress. It is like the author wants to force a romance but it is not cute at all but in fact, it became annoying.

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    A_reader May 16, 2025 1:47 pm

    Most Author's these days need a touch from a woman

    I can feel my feet. July 22, 2025 1:09 pm
    Most Author's these days need a touch from a woman A_reader

    I doubt they need to touch, I think all they need is to socialize and speak to a few more that’s not just their immediate family.

    Even just friendly relationship would help. Sigh…

    Gynnn July 22, 2025 8:10 pm

    I can usually tolerate romance in action genre tho it usually ruin the plot but it is still bearable for me... but this one. Nah It's really annoying. Sadly, O found it really interesting in the beginning not until the introduction of that girly.

    I can feel my feet. July 22, 2025 8:41 pm

    Ye, it’s too much of a centerpiece, especially so since it’s being used a some main drive for th3 protagonist to act in a certain way.a to achieve determined goal.
    It’s like early Mario game plot drive, but more embellished in somehow

    FluffyKnight December 6, 2025 3:13 pm

    Thanks for the warning!

    I already read my fill of TBATE and I dont want to waste time repeating the same plot device once again

    Gynnn December 6, 2025 9:50 pm
    Thanks for the warning!I already read my fill of TBATE and I dont want to waste time repeating the same plot device once again FluffyKnight

    The romance there is also iffy but I can still tolerate it. But this is one, IDK that damsel in distress is getting on my nervesm

    Gynnn December 6, 2025 9:54 pm

    But it really has a good start with the plot and all but that girly got introduced and the plot just revolved around her and her distressful mindset