Waiting with hope that the story catches up

Noir May 9, 2025 10:01 pm

I want to like it so badly, but there’s just no story so far. It’s been 22 chapters with barely any plot development. The dialogue is great, and the art is absolutely stunning! They clearly put a lot of care into it. I just wish they’d given the same attention to the actual plot.

Responses
    ⁺✧Ridora✧⁺ May 12, 2025 6:15 pm

    Wdym no plot? As it is right in front of you slowly making progress into the story?? I know for sure that patience isn't part of your strongest qualities

    Alergh May 13, 2025 3:54 am
    Wdym no plot? As it is right in front of you slowly making progress into the story?? I know for sure that patience isn't part of your strongest qualities ⁺✧Ridora✧⁺

    I was just going to say the same, what do you mean no plot? the plot is plotting right thereeee, actually, we have like three plots hahahaha

    Noir May 13, 2025 5:21 am

    Plot 1 – Their childhood connection. What happened to it? Nothing so far.
    Plot 2 – The Crown Prince probably isn’t human. Cool. I guess we’re navigating his emotions right now, seeing how he deals with having feelings for Doram.
    Plot 3 – The teacher, who seems to be a rival deity to the prince. This one just started, like, last chapter?
    Yep. The plot is definitely…plotting. Got it. If it works for you, I’m not judging. Personally, I just feel like I’ve seen very little plot and a whole lot of sex so far. I’m not even hating…I just said I’m hoping for more.

    nini May 14, 2025 7:14 am
    Plot 1 – Their childhood connection. What happened to it? Nothing so far.Plot 2 – The Crown Prince probably isn’t human. Cool. I guess we’re navigating his emotions right now, seeing how he deals with h... Noir

    i agree with you for sure, i feel like it's dragging a little bit i kind of have no interest in seeing them have sex. id rather figure out the connections

    Jax May 14, 2025 10:35 pm
    Plot 1 – Their childhood connection. What happened to it? Nothing so far.Plot 2 – The Crown Prince probably isn’t human. Cool. I guess we’re navigating his emotions right now, seeing how he deals with h... Noir

    As much as I want to say yes you're right, I think we should be patient currently they just got married their marriage isn't up to 5 months to be looking for drama, they're getting to know each other and explore their bodies. It'd shock that something unexpected would happen and shit would get serious.

    Noir May 14, 2025 11:00 pm
    As much as I want to say yes you're right, I think we should be patient currently they just got married their marriage isn't up to 5 months to be looking for drama, they're getting to know each other and explor... Jax

    Alright, I’m sticking around with optimism…mostly thanks to the Crown Prince’s royally filthy mouth.

    Alergh May 15, 2025 11:59 am
    As much as I want to say yes you're right, I think we should be patient currently they just got married their marriage isn't up to 5 months to be looking for drama, they're getting to know each other and explor... Jax

    Exactly, I think otherwise it would feel too rushed :v let the plot marinate, cook