I haven’t finished it yet only on chapter 4 but god is the dialogue awful its so soulles...

Marble May 14, 2025 9:35 pm

I haven’t finished it yet only on chapter 4 but god is the dialogue awful its so soulless and reading it is no fun its like one of those poorly written fanfiction stories from the 2010s in wattpad, the whole story seem way too fast paced, the only thing i like so far is that its beta x alpha and the art (;_;)

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    Marble May 14, 2025 9:37 pm

    I meant chp 5, hopefully the writing gets better and i dont end up wasting my time on a horribly written manhwa yet again

    Marble May 22, 2025 1:21 am

    Okay i finshed it and actually its really cute i love the ml tho the story is still a bit lacking but i enjoyed it more or less now

    sherri May 23, 2025 9:52 am

    i agree, i feel like manhuas are like this in general, they lack in substance and bore me. i like cdrama and cnovels but manhua just feel like wattpad stories lmao

    Marble May 25, 2025 10:03 pm
    i agree, i feel like manhuas are like this in general, they lack in substance and bore me. i like cdrama and cnovels but manhua just feel like wattpad stories lmao sherri

    Definitely can agree, ive only read a couple of manhwas that I genuinely actually really liked even tho ive read so many of them