Chap 57

Ophi May 27, 2025 4:31 am

there is no yimeline here
Clearly
Every chapter is a new event that barely leads into the other
It feels choppy and incorrectly done
Like someone's cutting the chapters and only putting half a chapter

Responses
    Homoeroticgod May 29, 2025 10:32 pm

    Yeah I think the novel is the best option I mean the art style and all is great but it is rushed