45 chapters just isn’t enough for even a good author to properly explore a couple’s chemistry, individual personalities, and side characters. UGH, I just wish they had given us more chapters! This could’ve easily been such a unique and compelling story with memorable characters all around. But given how many chapters we did get I wouldn’t say the author did a bad job at all, They did a pretty good job with the amount of chapters they were given.
Not enough chapters? That never stopped yaoi artist before with 7 chapter limits. Some of my favorite stories have 7 chapters. Personally if i see a story with any more then 25 chapters, i know it's going to have a very dragged on story.
25 chapters dragged on? Most of my favorite stories are like 50 chapters+ i guess that depends on preference, genres, and attention spans
This story definitely isn’t for everyone, but I found it really unique and charming. It was hard to get into at first because the secondhand embarrassment was a lot for me, but honestly, it turned out to be beautiful. If it had been longer and had more time to develop the side couple and the overall plot, I think it could’ve easily been super popular and well known.