maybe im not cut out for this yaoi life after all <3
Tbh the smut is js everywhere and so unneeded. I skip the smut because the plot just has SO much potential. You might just not be cut out for the rape and repetitive nature of alot of bls. There's good ones out there that are plot filled with the right amount of everything.
If you wanna get more into the plot maybe read up until chapter 10 n then the latest.
If you wanna read sumn for the plot, read no moral
The writing is actually very good. Your inability to understand doesn't make it bad. You should indeed quit.
You should stop reading entirely. Because plot elements are included in the sex scenes and you don't understand it because you can't handle the rape, which is fine, but you are missing key element which is why you think it's repetitive, because you're actually not reading it.
Also, sex scenes are rarely ever that relevant to the plot IN THEMSELVES in any genre. The only thing that makes them interesting is whatever plot detail is dropped during them which is the case here.
So actually, your criticism is contradictory which is not surprising because you are not reading the story fully because you insist on reading despite not being able to handle the rape scenes, which is fine, but again, if you can't handle it don't read because then you make nonsensical remarks because you don't even understand the plot you're reading.
Right right right. I'm js gonna put my fingers in my ears and tell you I'm still not reading ts. You lost me when you told me to stop reading when you have no authority over me. If you can't have an intense story with tension and key/important (plot element, lol) details without sex scenes that's not my issue. "Nonsensical remarks/criticism) brother, I'm replying to a comment with my opinion, not criticizing. I think it's repetitive because it's just sex,sex,sex. You can die on this hill, but it's still ass man. Pipe down, it's never that deep I PROMISE you.
Since you're not gonna read my response I'm not gonna bother read yours. Stay stupid, bye,
I'm talm bout the story you dumbass hoe, slow must be your thing. How the fuck would I reply if I didn't read your response.
Holy shit that response was so rude. I'm genuinely sorry. My opinion on the story will not change, I skip the smut because there's just too much of it to the point it's repetitive and boring. I appreciate you sharing your opinion with me, even if it wasn't respectfully. Once again, I must've been on something, responded to you like a total dickhead. Hope you're doing alright.
I hope both sides of your pillow are cold
I wanted to like this so bad but since like chapter 17 reading this (or skimming through this) has felt like a CHOREEE the concept actually had a chance to be interesting but the writing has not been it