I'm not saying it's not good. Like "not bad but not good". Writing is very much childish. Plot itself is not that impressive. Characters are shallow considering vivi has been abused but she doesn't show any sign of it .. like hellow trauma ??? Also I'm not really a fan of that whole academy arc, it was literally there for no reason beside dragging plot. All in all pretty much Wattpad teen author ahhh story
You have to turn your brain off and just enjoy it for what it is and if this type of stuff isn’t for you then let it go SpyingRat
I did actually. Just letting others know , what they are stepping into when picking this up. As i said it's not bad but not good just as u quoted "turn off your brain if u wanna read ts"
It was actually pretty entertaining. Unserious? Yes. Not every fic has to be serious and as much as this one goes? I would say its written better than most. Dumb and corny? Yes but entertaining and cute. You pretty much have to turn off your brain to read most of everything on this site anyways.
I'm not saying it's not good. Like "not bad but not good". Writing is very much childish. Plot itself is not that impressive. Characters are shallow considering vivi has been abused but she doesn't show any sign of it .. like hellow trauma ??? Also I'm not really a fan of that whole academy arc, it was literally there for no reason beside dragging plot. All in all pretty much Wattpad teen author ahhh story