Pretty much waste of time tbh

Billote June 2, 2025 8:18 am

I'm not saying it's not good. Like "not bad but not good". Writing is very much childish. Plot itself is not that impressive. Characters are shallow considering vivi has been abused but she doesn't show any sign of it .. like hellow trauma ??? Also I'm not really a fan of that whole academy arc, it was literally there for no reason beside dragging plot. All in all pretty much Wattpad teen author ahhh story

Responses
    SpyingRat June 3, 2025 5:08 am

    You have to turn your brain off and just enjoy it for what it is and if this type of stuff isn’t for you then let it go

    Billote June 3, 2025 7:31 am
    You have to turn your brain off and just enjoy it for what it is and if this type of stuff isn’t for you then let it go SpyingRat

    I did actually. Just letting others know , what they are stepping into when picking this up. As i said it's not bad but not good just as u quoted "turn off your brain if u wanna read ts"

    Cerealgirl June 5, 2025 2:28 am

    It was actually pretty entertaining. Unserious? Yes. Not every fic has to be serious and as much as this one goes? I would say its written better than most. Dumb and corny? Yes but entertaining and cute. You pretty much have to turn off your brain to read most of everything on this site anyways.

    locallesbiantook2L's June 6, 2025 1:13 pm

    you put out an opinion and people attack you for it anyways thx ill go read it

    Cerealgirl June 6, 2025 1:42 pm
    you put out an opinion and people attack you for it anyways thx ill go read it locallesbiantook2L's

    Attack? Oh baby you have never been attacked

    YumiAyumu June 9, 2025 10:38 am
    Attack? Oh baby you have never been attacked Cerealgirl

    Opposing opinions means attack or hate in this kind of day and age lol the replies were even civil

    locallesbiantook2L's June 9, 2025 1:30 pm
    Opposing opinions means attack or hate in this kind of day and age lol the replies were even civil YumiAyumu

    guess i match my name