Is it just me or the pace of this story is too fast? Like, it didn’t even get to explain...

Divine June 4, 2025 7:28 pm

Is it just me or the pace of this story is too fast? Like, it didn’t even get to explain some things, didn’t show more of the FL's thoughts, ML & FL met immediately and it lacks logical sense for ex. Being in the "hell" for idk 8 years and she haven't met any talking monsters in those past years!? Plus it lacks details. Is it just me?

Responses
    Divine June 4, 2025 7:30 pm

    Don't get me wrong, I like the concept of this story and FL's character. I'm just confused

    Divine June 4, 2025 7:31 pm

    For me, i think it lacks the connection of the characters to the readers

    Momokom0 June 4, 2025 8:30 pm

    i thought it was just me. the plot is good but i feel like so much was left out. maybe i should read the novel cause it’s possible the author just left out so many details.

    mim June 5, 2025 1:32 am

    dis right here im lost

    Novel_comic June 6, 2025 12:12 am

    Same here, like what the hell