U rlly do not know how to argue do ya babes? U didn't scroll thru shit; then you should point out where I dissed ur character or called u abnormal. Its not about what I want to happen it's about u not knowing anything about crime organizations, the consequences of betrayal in those settings, and character design. U also don't seem to know much about the landscape of crime and ppl in the US rn as well. U don't seem to know all of these and thats okay, but bad writing is not
I have to write all that bc its a context ik about and what you're writing is nonsensical. But anyways, this was fun!
"In the context of the story" and where only 6 chapters in. And again, why would I be angry over something like this? I wouldn't say I feel happy, rather confused as to why someone would spend that much time writing all that. When the person they're talking to isn't really interested based on their previous responses.
I'm not here to argue about what I want, because that is what I want to happen, and it's only normal for someone to disagree and I'm really fine with that. And yet here you are still replying when I made it clear that I have no intention of reading what you're saying.
I'm sorry if it offended you in any way, but that's not my problem anymore. I wrote that comment for myself. For me to comeback, I do appreciate the response, whether to agree or disagree but I'm not going to argue when we're looking at this clearly from different perspectives.
The context of the story AGAIN is criminal organizations and secret agent organizations in the USA. I have restated this multiple times. Are they going to become un-American, do they turn Korean??? I have been stating over and over and over again that I am talking ab this from the Western perspective and of crime + how sociopathic tendencies in criminals are expressed specifically HERE. I have said this again and again and again. There are 6 chapters out but if the author did minimal, and I mean even read a couple wiki pages out there ab how betrayal is perceived, this plotline would be nonsensical. I have stated this so so so many times. And I have said I just hope the author doesn't go with this type of plot line bc it would be senseless.
U did not offend me, I dislike illogical plotlines in stories and I was here to discuss. I like discussing good development and why certain arcs are not great/illogical. I have also told u in several comments that u can ignore me if you like lmaoo.
Idk what essay contest you’re trying to win but uh, the next chapter has MC (Uno) fucking another person and ML walks in on them and Uno just smirks and tells ML to wait for them to finish (〜￣△￣)〜
I do have my own vision for this. Idk, might just as well write it now 'cause I'm bored.
- Considering Uno's promiscuousness, a scene where he would film/show himself fucking with other dude—preferably someone on par with the ML. And I don't want it to be a cute jealousy....I want him to turn bat-shit crazy similar to how Kwon Taeha reacted when he found out that Hawon had to have sex (he didn't have a choice) with his brother/rival.