guys before I start this again, will the lips get better

No because you can’t improve perfection… but you get used to it. Either it’s toned down as the story progresses or you don’t realize…but i think it looks good. (Maybe look at the last chapter and make the decision for yourself)

Okay amendment to my comment (they are def toned down). Editor must have made author change it a bit. It looks perfect now.

Yess I'm halfway and I defo got used to it and it's starting to look better now!!