I Love the Art

leroling June 16, 2017 8:37 pm

The art is amazing as expected from the mangaka. I have to say that I'm very disappointed with the story though.

I mean, the uke seems to have a traumatic past with gays and I was hoping that it would have been explored first before he jumped into doing perverted stuff. It was a total 180 that I can't make sense of. I mean, he had his cock jacked off by a gay guy (because he was cornered) then suddenly he becomes infatuated with the guy? (Take note that he was scared as fuck when the fat guy touched his legs 1 chapter prior.)

Normally, he should be disgusted first or at least have some internal conflict going on. But noo.. the mangaka skipped that part and the uke became a jealous tsundere out of the blue right after. Next thing we know he is tied up and ready to take it up his ass without any resistance despite that he really has no other reason to do it. That's a missed opportunity for some drama right there.

And then there's the seme. I don't like his personality, but what I dislike more is his two-dimensional character. In 6 chapters, you should at least expect some insight to his feelings, especially since the story revolves around his schemes. What we get instead in chapter 6 is a rehash of what he said in chapter 2. No development whatsoever.

I really treasure one of the mangaka's work (Hidoku Shinaide), and since that one had a bad start, I'm hoping it's the same for this one. Bad start but gets better later. For now, I'll rate this as 1/5 (and I'm usually generous with my 5's).

Responses
    Anonymous June 19, 2017 11:51 am

    I agree with most of what you wrote, espacially the jump from beeing afraid of everything gay to wanting a dick up his ass... It feels to me as if a whole part of the story is missing, or maybe just not well thought out?

    JustAYaoiFangirl June 29, 2017 6:29 pm

    This is exactly why it took me more than 3 tries to get past chapter 1.

    shasri July 23, 2017 2:49 pm

    Exactly my thoughts on this manga...seme just kept playing tricks upon uke the whole time....i would really like to see the seme regretting a little and also getting jealous for the uke...

    shasri July 23, 2017 2:49 pm

    Exactly my thoughts on this manga.seme just kept playing tricks upon uke the whole time..i would really like to see the seme regretting a little and also getting jealous for the uke.

    Hisa September 23, 2017 1:14 am

    True euh it'a such a waste when the art is good af and the plot is...idk i dont want to talk shit about it lol