*Just random thoughts I had to get out!*

Midnight June 8, 2025 11:53 pm

*Just random thoughts I had to get out!*


If this story was able to explore the complex emotions of falling for another man (her husband) even though she deeply loved Takehisa (I think that’s his’s name) it would be really dope.

I won’t put that much hope into though lol. Honestly just a decent amount of affection mixed with the smut and I’m good lmao.

I do like how we can see the difference in culture for each of them like how when he said “it makes me want to hunt you,” I think for demons that compliment on her attractiveness but she took it as he’s going to eat me when he’s trying to eat something else lmao. Also how they don’t have a formal wedding ceremony so for them that was simply just a stage to present her as his wife. Whereas for humans that’s an important milestone in life. I know it’s simple ya’ll but I do like how it seems he’s willing to learn and listen when she speaks since their cultures are so different.

It doesn’t seem like he hates her at all. He’s not disrespectful and honestly at times he looks sad. He ultimately just wants her to have the kid and go about her life so she not burdened and always sad since he can tell her heart is somewhere else. He even said that he “has feelings too.”

Responses
    Trina June 9, 2025 7:19 pm

    Well said! I agree hopefully we see more of this story soon.