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@ chapter 5, definitely not a hug fan of the pacing, it feels so rushed but ima stick with this for a bit.
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@ chapter 5, definitely not a hug fan of the pacing, it feels so rushed but ima stick with this for a bit.
after reading the 1st few chapters i can see why people are upset of how rushed everything feels/mc has been introduced but frankly it's not that bad the pace reminds me of the 1st chapters of how After Life Dinner rolled out too, lore can always be introduced later on and story pacing can improve too, this story has potential and i hope it gains more attraction so that it improves in th e near future, the babies are sooo cute and storyline is interesting so far.