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I will say that it’s somebody that wasn’t reading for such a long long time came back read the chapter 11 and 12 was like wait. What in the flipping fuck read the first chapter and completely agree with you because it feels too overbearing it stops feeling calculating when you’re doing dumb shit like this.
???? felt like the author was writing every bit of the story with the intent of "hm, how can i make my readers more shocked than the last one"
dropped this bc it felt like the development was quite forced, even the romance part of every character felt sudden! lol