Excuse???
Go look at the art in Mr. A's Farm.
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/mr_a_s_farm/
See this glorious art and then tell me they did good on the dicks. Weird thing to admit but it has some of the prettiest gentiles I've ever seen drawn.
Go look at any uncensored version of Shutline.
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/shutline/
The story is gritty (but so fucking good) and the dicks are immaculate, if a little too unrealistically long (which is expected in yaoi at this point).
I'm sorry but the entire time I was reading it (only got to chapter 13) I was wondering wtf was seeing with them dicks lmao. I would take the light sabers over those.
I agree with you on all your other points though. Story was poorly done and yet had zero twists. I could guess what things would be happening even before they were mentioned in story. Art is odd and not proportional. Also, half the time the seme looks like a dorito chest???
In comparison to the rest of the art the dicks, balls, and anus were the ONLY well-drsen things. Idk why you brought in OTHER comics. I've seen well-drsen dicks before too.
*Well-drawn things.
I wasn't comparing the well-drawn dicks to any other comics. But we had to compare, it's prob a B in my book. An A by some other standards. Idk why you take so much offense.
I haven't seen the former. But I read some of Shutline during the early days of the comic. I've seen better since then. I don't recall Shutline that much but the art there is gorgeous. Great proportions, color, expressions. I honestly don't know why you take so much offense at my comment on the private parts.
This shit is so a$$. I tried giving it a chance since the rating is so low. And yep. The rating this time didn't lie. The art is so butt-fckng ugly. Like the only thing they focused on and is well drawn are the dicks and the ball sacs and the anus. That's about it. The story is so dumb. Not a good flow. Terrible. No good. Can't even feel anything.
Rated it 2/5 stars.
Powered thru it but only made it to ch. 7 that's it.