This... isn't as good as the comments led me to believe it'd be.

BlackCat July 2, 2025 8:44 pm

This... isn't as good as the comments led me to believe it'd be. I read to ch 10 and I won't say any spoilers. The characters are introduced--if you can even call it that--very quickly before it just moves on to another plot point. The reader isn't given any time to learn about the character before the plot progresses. Speaking of, the plot is confusing in the way that it's obvious whats happening but we're also not told anything at the same time.
It's like when a scene happens in a movie but there's a weird cut. It's just very abrupt and disconnected.
If you like porn no plot, I guess this is okay for that, but eh, not me. To each their own.
Someone leave a comment under if it gets better ig?

Responses
    Doll July 2, 2025 8:51 pm

    i agree, honestly its just gooner material and im the targeted gooner

    krelic July 3, 2025 11:15 am
    i agree, honestly its just gooner material and im the targeted gooner Doll

    IJBOL but same twin

    I.N.Syberia July 22, 2025 1:13 am

    Ch.18 and it doesn't. Just big nice bodies and femdom, and questionable comedy. There is a underplot, but it is almost non existent and, as you said, always suddenly cut off.