Ok... now that I've calmed down...

AnaB July 5, 2025 8:11 am

Are you telling me that the 4 commanders of the King's Army KNOW that Abel is the King's Regas and left him WITHOUT PROTECTION while he's asleep knowing that A MEMBER OF THE COUNCIL IS IN THE BARRACKS so that Abel can WALK AROUND AT NIGHT to the King's barrack and NO ONE NOTICED HIM SCREAMING TO BE LET IN?!?!?!?!

Sorry. No. No F**KING WAY that's possible. Considering the personalities of the character's that would NEVER HAPPEN.

Ugh... such an absurd whole in the plot just so they can somehow separate Abel from the King.... tsc. I hate this. Such a good story having this huge mess up? Ugh...

Well... I'll continue reading it, though ahahahaha I reeeally wanna see that member of the council being obsessed with Abel LOL He'll go down a fall of his own making. I know it.

Responses
    Danieka July 5, 2025 8:20 am

    I promise the story is worth sticking around for, there are just little moments where you have to suspend your belief because it is again just a story. They can make unrealistic aspects occur to further the plot (even if it pisses us off lol.)

    AnaB July 5, 2025 7:04 pm
    I promise the story is worth sticking around for, there are just little moments where you have to suspend your belief because it is again just a story. They can make unrealistic aspects occur to further the plo... Danieka

    Ooh I'm sticking with this story!

    This is the 2nd — huge! — plot hole I noticed?!
    Yes.

    Will I stop reading this story because of it?
    Nope.


    Ahaha This is too good to be dropped because of this. I'd need something bigger than all of the good parts of the story so far to make me drop it.

    Sugureta July 7, 2025 4:54 pm
    Ooh I'm sticking with this story!This is the 2nd — huge! — plot hole I noticed?!Yes.Will I stop reading this story because of it?Nope.Ahaha This is too good to be dropped because of this. I'd need something... AnaB

    I have the memory of a goldfish, but if I remember correctly in the novel, one of Karas’ men was sent to Abel.

    Also, they want to keep Abel hidden as much as possible, especially since one of the council elders was present. They need to distance themselves — as well as Karas’ close aides — because the council elders have a lot of spies.

    AnaB July 7, 2025 7:16 pm
    I have the memory of a goldfish, but if I remember correctly in the novel, one of Karas’ men was sent to Abel.Also, they want to keep Abel hidden as much as possible, especially since one of the council elder... Sugureta

    Well, if that's the case, then how is Abel walking around the camp, making a fuss in front of Karas' tend, and being dragged away by a mere "tool" of a boy? Isn't it just weird?