So much wasted potential! Art is good. It's not perfect, but I like it a lot. Story could ...

pinco June 25, 2017 7:42 am

So much wasted potential! Art is good. It's not perfect, but I like it a lot. Story could have been good too, but no, it feels rushed, the sex is strange ... no need for romance, but well, not to mention the SPOILER rape at the end. I have read many alternative universe djs, but that's not a good one. Curtain Call from H-eichi is something that comes to my mind.

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    Anonymous June 25, 2017 8:20 am

    So I guess you didn't notice that page 47 ends with the words, to be continued.

    pinco June 25, 2017 8:55 am
    So I guess you didn't notice that page 47 ends with the words, to be continued. @Anonymous

    Well, how does that change that the story is bad? You cannot save it with a good end. But nice to see people are sensitive about critism like always.

    Anonymous June 25, 2017 8:49 pm
    Well, how does that change that the story is bad? You cannot save it with a good end. But nice to see people are sensitive about critism like always. pinco

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