Now what

Medeia July 8, 2025 1:29 pm

Stopped reading at chapter 29. Is this worth jt?

The emotional pull is solid, and the stakes feel real. But after they’re adopted into nobility, the plot loses focus. The survival-driven premise fades, replaced by typical reverse harem tropes. The tension disappears, and the story quickly turns dull.

Worse, the writing gets sloppy. In Chapter 23, Kashumir says she’s not used to having precious family, yet her whole life revolves around saving her sister. It doesn’t add up.

Responses
    Witchery August 5, 2025 6:17 pm

    The suitors aren’t even interesting or impressive. She’s written as being moronically clueless about obvious social signals and in appropriate behaviors related to getting her attention. The prince is written like a loser who just keeps using his position to forcibly insert himself into her life, and between other relationships. There is no chemistry at all between her or any of the other suitors, so she gets dumbed down to prevent their annoying behavior from invoking an understandably annoyed response