Responses

I wanted to see the husband support him in the story, like in chapter 2 which was really promising and made me think that the plot would go in that direction. But then, chapters 3&4 just had rushed intimacy/sex between them, and chapter 5 was typical shoujo.
Maybe with an extra, where we can see them 2years later or something like that, and where the uke had cut his hair and stopped pretending to be a woman, I'd change my mind about the story...
Maybe it's an unpopular opinion, but I'm a little uneasy with this story. It was cute and all, but I don't really like that the uke will live as a woman for the rest of his life. He has been forced to pretend to be a woman by his mother (and I agree, that's abuse) and he never really says that's what he wants or feels about himself... At first, I thought that the seme would help him to defy his mother and live like what he is, but in the end, he calls him a "good girl", his "wife", his "bride" so I'm a little disappointed. If the uke had said he wanted to be a girl, or that he considered being a girl, or even that he wanted to be treated like a girl, I wouldn't feel so conflicted... So yeah, it was a good read, but I expected more and I have mixed feelings about the ending!