Responses
It feels very rushed. They deserved better.
Absolutely this could be a really good story. I couldn't get at all how, when and why seme fell in love with uke(￣∇￣") it was like author had to write their story.
I had high expectation for second couple's story but this is too short, too shallow to see development of their feelings and relationship. It was frustrating for me ┑(￣Д ￣)┍