hehe ik tha u love to see jinx bcs of jeakyung lmao its ok to admit it honey
I read it because it's fun to trash it and see everything that's wrong with it. Its fun to realize that I at least have better taste and that I'm right, this story is stupid.
ure actually so wrong but okay look who’s chasing who now
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Lol! Learn how to spell before I could ever take your words seriously!
it’s actually a short form/slang for “you’re” if ure not aware lmao going after someone’s english is not the hit tweet moment u think it is… ure just running out of things to say
"running out of things to say." Fine, if you want a rant. I'll give you a rant.
I said this on another comment, based in my personal opinion:
Even if we get a sob back story, it still doesn't excuse his shitty ass behavior as an adult. Treating an innocent man like Dan like complete garbage and everyone around him like objects is uncalled for. He hasn't seen Dan as person up until chapter 70. I think what would have raised my 1 start to at least a 3 is if we've learned from JK a little more and had him be somewhat nicer.
If the old man had come into the picture when JK visit Dan's grandma back in S1 and at least started to be nicer to Dan despite his ego... It would have definitely been great.
Kinda like Jaeshin from Ghost Nocturne. We learned about his passed early on, and by the end of S1 chapters 24, he had already started seeing Lee Nok as a respectable person, not a object for his own pleasure. Jaeshin fucked up and despite his pride, he was already coming up ways to apologize to Lee Nok; he even got him a flower as an apology.
But nooooo JK has just treated Kim Dan like garbage. Even in chapter 69, he threw Dan and sprayed water on him a day AFTER Dan realized he had an alcohol problem. Dan should have been put in rehab... He should have not be left alone where he can relapse super easy. It's not night and day where someone remains sober, at least not for the majority of the people. They need support more than anything.
I hate that JK didn't see Dan as a valuable individual up until now. He still wanted him for sex and sex only up until recently, thinking that's all Dan is good for. "( – ⌓ – )
Sure, be may have developed feelings for him and at least started questioning... But that still doesn't make sense how he didn't even treat him better. It dragged on WAY too long with him having a horrible temple and almost 0.1% character development.
This story had potential, as well as the characters, but the author didn't take it.
Not to mention Dan... Dan is weak and he has hardly any likeable characteristics. He's plain and boring. It would have been nice if he had some sort of glow up. Drowning in self pity is, to me, a disappointment. If he had better self value and at least realized that he's a victim and doesn't deserve that treatment better, is unfortunate.
He left because he felt bad, not because he didn't want to be treated like garbage. Sure, he told JK around the lines of, "what? Aren't you satisfied? I'm just a toy to you."
If Dan had expressed that even in his thoughts more and had expressed more a bit of anger to himself or around the lines of: "you know what? I'm better than that. He doesn't deserve me. I made a mistake, but how he treated me was uncalled for."
Drowning in alcohol is lame. In BJ Alex, the bottom at least had that idea of a little self worth. Dan has a job. His grandmother is still alive. He's a free man and no longer gets treated poorly... Yet he got so depressed because his trauma, that he turned to alcohol. To me... That's meh. Like, can we get a Dan that is not suffering, pitable, and pathetic?
so what’s ur point the story is STILL meh like u said and im only staying to see a chasing arc and see the ending, like i said in my initial comment. so what’s the source of commotion here
if ure confused with why i mentioned “who’s chasing who now” i’m not referring to any character in the story. i’m referring to the person commenting on my comment, bc apparently to them i’m chasing after them (but i’m not lmao what even) bc also apparently we’ve had a comment dispute in the past lol
maybe u just replied to the wrong person idk
who else is here not bc the story is excellent but bc you want to see a possible chasing arc and see what happens at the end