does anyone else get frustrated by the incessant monologue? and the unnecessary dialogue t...

lilithespark July 13, 2025 8:27 pm

does anyone else get frustrated by the incessant monologue? and the unnecessary dialogue tags? ex: jimin says, “it’s fine, sera. don’t worry about it.” AND THEN “i stated calmly”?? the author treats its readers like babies like i can tell already without the dialogue tags pls tell me the writing improves…

Responses
    .... July 17, 2025 5:15 pm

    no FR it's giving highschool english essay

    lilithespark July 17, 2025 8:44 pm
    no FR it's giving highschool english essay ....

    FRR i would know

    RaD August 20, 2025 5:41 pm

    I just started reading this and that was such a big pet peeve and you mean to tell me it doesn’t go away