Chp 13

axoxyxoxs July 14, 2025 6:53 pm

Ngl chat, I'm starting to get bored... I've always preferred plot/character over artstyle, so I kinda hope that the baddie has some sort of exorcist powers, cause if she ends up as just another victim I might let it marinate or even drop it. The premise is interesting but the execution is honestly kinda meh at this point. Ryota killed his brother is actually better than this lol

Responses
    gayshley 囧 July 15, 2025 4:02 am

    Literally. This is highkey bad and I’m glad I’ve caught on otherwise I’d JUDT stopped reading

    OuterSpaced July 16, 2025 3:42 pm

    I agree, the concept is very interesting but it seems a bit messy. Instead of it being a mystery if just appears like the author doesn't know how to map out all the rules effectively. Compared to something like 'The Summer Hikaru Died' or 'MADK' it lacks some substance and is getting a bit stale

    axoxyxoxs July 16, 2025 6:14 pm
    I agree, the concept is very interesting but it seems a bit messy. Instead of it being a mystery if just appears like the author doesn't know how to map out all the rules effectively. Compared to something like... OuterSpaced

    Exactlyyyyyy, like the morbidness and themes of the story doesn't disturb me unlike the other readers (I've read worse), but dark≠good, and compared to the other horror stories rn (like tshd) this doesn't have the same oomph that I feel when reading those. It kind of feels too episodic rn. Maybe its a slow burn, but it feels a lil TOO slow for me its been more than 10 chaps already and I still haven't felt a shift/conflict in the story since chap 1. Which is why I hope the baddie actually becomes a problem for them and not just another fodder character

    gayshley 囧 July 17, 2025 1:42 am
    Exactlyyyyyy, like the morbidness and themes of the story doesn't disturb me unlike the other readers (I've read worse), but dark≠good, and compared to the other horror stories rn (like tshd) this doesn't hav... axoxyxoxs

    I totally agree. There’s no actual plot. Nothing to get excited about, like questions that need to be solved our actual mystery to keep the readers hooked. Every case is resolved the same way, so easily. As you said it’s pretty episodic, which isn’t always bad but we’re 10+ chapters in and I could’ve just read 5 instead and nothing would’ve changed

    Jieun July 27, 2025 7:08 pm

    Agreed. The art is wasted on a trashy plot despite its promising premise.
    I low key expected something like Black Buttler or Count Cain. Low key only
    It's just too boring and i feel the author is reliving their misogyny through this manga