Too early for the ML to /really/ love her. I mean, he CAN love an idealized version of her -- the one that he saw through the sword. But it's be better if the author fleshes it out some more! Where they spend time and he really DOES fall for her -- the her that's in that reality. That'd be even better to read.
Too early for the ML to /really/ love her. I mean, he CAN love an idealized version of her -- the one that he saw through the sword. But it's be better if the author fleshes it out some more! Where they spend time and he really DOES fall for her -- the her that's in that reality. That'd be even better to read.