So fast

SJ02 July 15, 2025 11:33 am

Isn’t this developing way too quickly? First the mercenary being obsessed with her from the get-go. Now that kid trusting her instantly after going through incredibly traumatic event. It’s like they try to rush everything. I don’t believe that anyone with this kind of trauma, who was lied to the first time as well, would be just so happy and fast to trust again. Sure, he could agree to sponsoring, but loyalty? Shouldn’t their relationship slowly build up? It’s not like she would admit „I will abuse you” straight to his face, and with her reputation she shouldn’t be that easy to trust even more. Idk, the artstyle is so pretty, but the plot is so rushed and already has some dumb points.

Responses
    Hot warm dumpling July 22, 2025 2:47 pm

    he was just acting lol everyone fell for his act

    KeiLynnx July 22, 2025 3:53 pm

    Wasn't it shown that that the mage isn't loyal yet though?

    SJ02 July 22, 2025 7:02 pm
    he was just acting lol everyone fell for his act Hot warm dumpling

    Was he? Dunno, wasn’t said. With the mercenary dude it wouldn’t be weird if they rushed it, they did it before

    SJ02 July 22, 2025 7:02 pm
    Wasn't it shown that that the mage isn't loyal yet though? KeiLynnx

    Not in the chapter I was talking about

    SJ02 July 22, 2025 7:02 pm
    he was just acting lol everyone fell for his act Hot warm dumpling

    I didn’t read new chapter btw