Honestly, this story could have ended at the Ferris wheel but I got the feeling that the author somewhat wanted to tell other stories too, and then just decided to jam them all into one story.
SPOILERS AHEAD . . . . . .It was after that point that the story just got utterly riddled with cliches and tropes and forced (and rather repetitive) sex scenes. ML is the bastard son of a conglomerate, because of course he is, he has a non-bastard brother with a mutual hate for each other, because of course, his mother raised him in secrete without ever telling him who his father was, because of course, tells her son to go find him on her death bed (cuz why not send him to a stranger who you've hated for 20 years?), he wants revenge on his father, because of course, the MC knows and has a bad history with the non-bastard brother, because of course, non-bastard brother is utterly incompetent, because obviously.
And it is full of weird plot holes. Firstly, that forced in sex scene at the hospital. ML is OBSESSED with MC's health, but when MC passes out for unknown reasons, and within TWO MINUTES of waking up in the hospital, ML decides to initiate sex in the hospital room. I think the author just wanted to have a hospital sex scene.... Also, we actually know nothing about the ML's and his brother's relationship. They hate each other purely for plot's sake. And how in the world is making a fool out of his brother somehow revenge against his father? And how exactly does that alone make him take over the company away from his father? Honestly, the whole take-over plot just makes utterly no sense.
The relationship is great. It's good. It's not toxic. It's mostly healthy. This whole thing should have ended at the Ferris wheel though.
Honestly, this story could have ended at the Ferris wheel but I got the feeling that the author somewhat wanted to tell other stories too, and then just decided to jam them all into one story.
SPOILERS AHEAD
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.It was after that point that the story just got utterly riddled with cliches and tropes and forced (and rather repetitive) sex scenes. ML is the bastard son of a conglomerate, because of course he is, he has a non-bastard brother with a mutual hate for each other, because of course, his mother raised him in secrete without ever telling him who his father was, because of course, tells her son to go find him on her death bed (cuz why not send him to a stranger who you've hated for 20 years?), he wants revenge on his father, because of course, the MC knows and has a bad history with the non-bastard brother, because of course, non-bastard brother is utterly incompetent, because obviously.
And it is full of weird plot holes. Firstly, that forced in sex scene at the hospital. ML is OBSESSED with MC's health, but when MC passes out for unknown reasons, and within TWO MINUTES of waking up in the hospital, ML decides to initiate sex in the hospital room. I think the author just wanted to have a hospital sex scene....
Also, we actually know nothing about the ML's and his brother's relationship. They hate each other purely for plot's sake. And how in the world is making a fool out of his brother somehow revenge against his father? And how exactly does that alone make him take over the company away from his father? Honestly, the whole take-over plot just makes utterly no sense.
The relationship is great. It's good. It's not toxic. It's mostly healthy. This whole thing should have ended at the Ferris wheel though.