Honestly no complaints ! I liked it despite how rushed the ending feels but I hope the aut...

Vasha July 19, 2025 11:23 am

Honestly no complaints ! I liked it despite how rushed the ending feels but I hope the author is doing OK.
I dont know how I feel about "vaguely European country where they play American Football" (???) It's a thing sure, but it didnt give me "out of the states" vibes. I thought bro just traveled to California or Miami until I saw the Tudor style buildings Also they refer to Diego as kid and bro lives with his mom and has football practice, is he 18??? And if he's 18, but Jayden is post military he's gotta be 21+ (because drinking age) weird ass age gap imo

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    oikawas.wifeyyy July 27, 2025 10:48 pm

    are we sharing a brain cell right now because you have my exact thoughts

    GrassyArtz August 7, 2025 6:02 am

    I just assumed it was college football so he’s at least in his early 20s (would then bring up the lack of classes but that’s plot is irrelevant) Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

    ebbyemmy August 16, 2025 3:14 pm

    I like starting with no complaints and ending with a complaint lmao (I mean that very genuinely bc I would do the same thing loll)