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I agree I feel like this story could've had more development in general. There's probably some type of contract thing so it's not like they can draw/write more unfo. but for a bl it's definently better written than most bls on here lol
Tbh it started strong, really strong. But then the development of their relationship happened too quickly for me I guess. I feel like Mc could have shown even more restraint because he had so many problems going on… maybe it sounds weird, Sorry… I expected much more happening before they got together. I don’t know if I had high expectations but I feel like it was too simple… don’t know… I was expecting another type of development. I feel like there was something missing before they got together and all those stuff happened. I can still say that I really loved it. Their chemistry was amazing. It felt very real. I actually would read it again. The second couple was boring. I didn’t even care about them.
Just read it so I wouldn’t miss anything about the main couple.