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A+++

You put it brilliantly. This is exactly what I thought. Sorry, but this story is meh for me...

Damn, it's totally accurate i'm speechless

same, I didnt like it that much either
A+++
You put it brilliantly. This is exactly what I thought. Sorry, but this story is meh for me...
Damn, it's totally accurate i'm speechless
same, I didnt like it that much either
Such a little unassuming Oneshot generating as much dislike as it did the first time it was posted, LOL! The reason why it rubs so many people the wrong way, is probably because of the uke, Takeru, who gives in too easily and too enthusiastically to his heat and his attraction for Luca, a virtual stranger (didn't even know he was a boy, ffs!), while, and just as easily, giving up on his relationship with Kanata, his childhood "Love". Yeah, yeah, it's just a superficial threesome Oneshot, but it does bring up the question of primal instincts vs. nurtured emotions/rationality. As a romanticist, I found it very off-putting that Takeru's feelings for Kanata were so tenuous, that just because of being physiologically paired with Luca, he could so easily ditch Kanata and all his feelings and their loving experiences. He didn't feel too conflicted at the idea of breaking up with his loyal childhood fiancee, the boy he had "loved" most of his life; he didn't even bother to reflect at all before deciding, "see ya, Kanata!" and "fuck me, Luca!". The threesome might as well be Luca's act of charity for Kanata, because it's obvious Takeru would've been fine with Luca only. This supports the argument that primal instincts are stronger than rationality and/or nurtured feelings, which would be antithetical to emotional commitment and/or faithfulness (whether in a monogamous or polyamorous relationship), which is most definitely anti-romantic (︶︿︶)