Wait im confused. Are you mad about the SA or how the plot is written
I feel like while u actually might have had a point, using all of those fancy words just makes u look prentious and like a brag "oh look at how articulated I am"
Ngl i was having a stroke trying to read that
this feels ai generated
Right???
This is just another attempt of a subcategory of porno writers who can't admit that "they're just like the other girls" and keep trying to shoehorn pseudo intellectual depth and contrived drama into their cheap porn slop as if that will be enough to qualify what they're doing as proper literature. All this does is hamper the chances of their mindless slop living a comfortable life in its own niche, instead forcing uncessary scrutiny unto it under the standards of the higher category that it carries pretensions of, at which point it can only miserably embarrass itself.