It is too fast paced. Also the thoughts of the protagonists aren't expressed clearly. How did he have the antidote? How did the emperor knew right away he was a man? Why wasn't he given a name? (I read up to chapter 2)
It is too fast paced. Also the thoughts of the protagonists aren't expressed clearly. How did he have the antidote? How did the emperor knew right away he was a man? Why wasn't he given a name? (I read up to chapter 2)