Holy pacing

Coochie Bucci August 3, 2025 9:11 am

I’m not understanding how yall are eating this up it just jumps and cuts to one thing and then another, back to back. I don’t doubt the story is good but the pacing is terrible we don’t even get proper character introductions

Responses
    Blueberry mound August 13, 2025 11:57 pm

    It's too tear magia slop. It's cliche after close and ten different storylines jammed together. It's great if you need to turn off your brain. I don't think most people are reading this because it is some great piece of literature ( ̄∇ ̄")