I do find it funny how people say I'm not gonna read this, but several chapters later, they still make comments lmao....
exactly, he is trash, so why tf would you think this story makes sense? Him ending up with Dan is not a good ending and we all know this is where we are heading. I read fucked up shit from the mid 2010s, but it's always the fluffy ones or lighter toxic bls that romanticize the shit out of very dangerous things. If the author would properly portray it as a bad relationship it could be like killing stalking, but it's not that type of bl. They are meant to have a happy ending, but the ml has no redeeming qualities. Like zero. This is struggle love at it's worst. I mean the dude raped him so many times. I read just to finish it and to truly stand behind my opinion that it is not a good bl on any level, be it moral or artistic. The comments are here for people to comment and that's it. You can't police what others write, and considering the bullshit you write, you have no right to tell them they are the weird ones.
People get into toxic relationships all the time, its not a new scenario in the real world. If someone cant separate fiction from non, then they need to just read the tags, say hey, not my cup of tea, and look for another. Lots of great stories out there for everyone to enjoy. I think what people look and hope for is character development. That's the drive, can people change and a lot of times, there upbringing backstory is at fault. This is also true in the real world, so to answer your question, yes this story can make sense, dont forget in the story, someone did agree to have sex for money, cant deflect that!
Look guys !! Just chill !! Its just a story.. and above all ..you guys needs to accept it that not everyone in this world is nice and good..there are jerks,rude, psychopaths,mean every kind of people are existing.. JK is similar.. you may not like him .. but don't expect him to be nice and be good
You guys complaining how u want him to change and be good otherwise you won't read or whatever.....then don't read....
Not everyone is nice and not everywhere is cherry blossom.