The smut is iffy...

TheOldYaoiFan August 4, 2025 3:54 am

Idk if it's just me but the smut scenes in Jinx feel like a chore, I recall Bj Alex had a similar intimate dynamic but the smut scenes were not so lacking?
Tbh they make me feel incredibly uncomfortable, we barely see Dan enjoying himself and it looks very forced and r" pey.
Idk what's wrong with Korean authors and fetishizing r'pe?
Jjk and Dan BARELY have any suggsual chemistry and the whole thing is hella dub-con straight up assault at times.
Tbh one great example of a couple who does things the rough way is the couple in Shutline, the art is stunning and though the smut scenes are getting slightly better, it's still really subpar for a manhwa this famous.
Great art doesn't mean it always communicates a feeling, it feels like it's just smut for the sake of smut.
Idk, it's just my opinion, the author improved by the end of Bj Alex but we got another version of the same story but worse in some ways?
Idk, jjk seems kinda irredeemable atp, just read the comments lol. Face card doesn't decline but he sucks as a character and he sucks in the smut category, he's the perfect example of a guy who only cares if he gets off.
With a mostly female audience, I don't think that's appealing.

Responses
    bigphatjuicybussi August 4, 2025 3:59 am

    I agree, the most sensual scenes for me focus more on foreplay and making the uke feel good instead of just the seme

    MySun tan August 4, 2025 4:20 am

    You're totally right, I've always thought that too. But in Jinx's case, I think the way Jaekyung does it has a traumatic reason. We'll find out in the next chapters.

    TheOldYaoiFan August 4, 2025 9:54 am
    You're totally right, I've always thought that too. But in Jinx's case, I think the way Jaekyung does it has a traumatic reason. We'll find out in the next chapters. MySun tan

    I get what you're saying! He definitely is rough even on his own body. But he also seems to have sadistic tendencies tbh, at first at least. He likes to bully Dan in the bedroom AND out of it, it's just that in their intimate scenes it all feels forceful, the author is also wild for clearly making Dan say he didn't like it then he switches up at times and says it's not all that bad then he says he hates it and only feels pain most of the time, it's like, which one is it? Does he like it like that now or not? To me he looks in pain all the time... idk, aren't the readers to enjoy those scenes since there's so many of them? They really feel like a chore imo, I don't see their appeal.
    There's a way to execute 'roughness' and 'dominance' well in smut and this author sucks at it, it's straight up just assault, heck it even feels like the author is forcing Dan to tell us he likes it sometimes to make us feel less iffy, but if you gotta do that, it means ur scenes are clearly coming across less sexy and more creepy

    TheOldYaoiFan August 4, 2025 9:57 am
    I agree, the most sensual scenes for me focus more on foreplay and making the uke feel good instead of just the seme bigphatjuicybussi

    Right?
    I had no idea so many fans felt the same way! Tbh swap Dan for a woman and a whole lot of people would be more outraged + it would become no different from most
    intimate dynamics in hentai.