Sigh

I laughed so hard at this

I so understand u

I get this, I think if the dirty talk wasn’t so shit and she looked like she enjoyed it more I’d be more interested but this isn’t written very well it’s kinda the thing u gotta turn ur mind off for. The dialogue just feels so heavily forced by a male perspective who’s never even been in a situation like this it’s not as great as it could have been. I kept fighting with myself like “I like it bc it’s a hot fantasy but I also hate it bc why does it feel like a man wrote it and not a woman…”