
It's not :( I'm born and raised native English speaker, I speak some mandarin and some french so I can understand how languages don't directly translate to different languages because of my experience with other languages. The story doesn't flow correctly. I'm confused where the relationship is supposed to start since it's "started" blossoming but it doesn't make sense, the thought processes are a just a little too confusing for me to follow. I like it, but it's not a comfortable read right now

Hey, we appreciate you. You can only work with what you're given, eh? Besides, sometimes I feel like the authors just throw in text without context and expect us to figure it out on our own, which would only make sense if there was action in the scene to tell us like a movie. But usually there isn't enough going on or the drawings of faces and events aren't descriptive enough to stand alone in their portrayal of emotion and actions to lead us to the natural conclusion of what the text is supposed to mean. Thanks for your work!
the translation is so confusing i really tried my best though