Responses
By how Albert immediately fell for Asha and how Asha seemingly reciprocated his feelings, I felt this was going to be a story of max 20 chapters. This actually matches the pace the author has had since the beginning of the story
Legit? Dam, ig so now that I think about it in retrospect. Still, I think at least one more ch would have been nice cause this shift had me gagged in a way that could have been... more enjoyable.
I'm so confused. This definitely should have been paced out slower. Why the rush? Why so messy?? Author, this was going so well!!! It was peak! /TДT)/