You ever read character dialogue and wonder how MUCH the authors use of “trying to sound...

Kacos_34 August 16, 2025 1:56 am

You ever read character dialogue and wonder how MUCH the authors use of “trying to sound smart but just saying words” lowers the quality of a chapter, bc unless Nick was written to intentionally make the whole conversation seem like nonsense, I felt whatever point being made was not made like at all….

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    MohnDoe August 21, 2025 7:14 pm

    Hey.. sorry to offend but if that conversation seemed like nonsense to you, you don't have very good reading and comprehension skills

    mare327 August 21, 2025 10:44 pm
    Hey.. sorry to offend but if that conversation seemed like nonsense to you, you don't have very good reading and comprehension skills MohnDoe

    I wish I could like your post

    Kacos_34 August 22, 2025 2:58 am
    Hey.. sorry to offend but if that conversation seemed like nonsense to you, you don't have very good reading and comprehension skills MohnDoe

    I most certainly do but when it comes to talking about the human condition and how we’d evolve based off the sociality constructs, it just feels off to suddenly use EXTREMELY academic dialogue for these topics with a character that has not spoken in that manner from previous chapters. Like this feels copy and pasted from a journal in the sense. So no offense but go fuck yourself dude

    Kacos_34 August 22, 2025 2:59 am
    I most certainly do but when it comes to talking about the human condition and how we’d evolve based off the sociality constructs, it just feels off to suddenly use EXTREMELY academic dialogue for these topic... Kacos_34

    *societal