I feel like it's playing everything too fast. They fall in love in two days, she makes the antidote (which was supposed to not exist, she needed time and study and all that) work in the first try, now they're facing the villain who possibly cursed him. What's next? They'll reveal she's a witch, somehow she'll kiss him true love magic, he'll say he knew all along she was a witch, they both will defeat the dark witch, people will realise there are good witches and they'll marry?? It feels so rushed as if the author doesn't know how to build momentum, how to keep on giving some twists and turns to the plot... Idk, I don't need their romance to be a slow burn but I also don't need or want it cooked at 1000 degrees for 2 seconds.
I feel like it's playing everything too fast. They fall in love in two days, she makes the antidote (which was supposed to not exist, she needed time and study and all that) work in the first try, now they're facing the villain who possibly cursed him.
What's next? They'll reveal she's a witch, somehow she'll kiss him true love magic, he'll say he knew all along she was a witch, they both will defeat the dark witch, people will realise there are good witches and they'll marry??
It feels so rushed as if the author doesn't know how to build momentum, how to keep on giving some twists and turns to the plot... Idk, I don't need their romance to be a slow burn but I also don't need or want it cooked at 1000 degrees for 2 seconds.