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He's been falling for her ever since he heard her voice for the first time. It's been months at this point.
But I do like your version of what's going to happen with the plot!
I definitely think he's going to tell her he knew she was a witch the whole time, and he sort of figured out about the love potion. But I think the curse is going to be new information to him.
I hope it's not true love's kiss, but instead having proper burials / funerals for the bones. They don't deserve to be hidden in that room and dusty.
This is just gonna be an older Coraline
I feel like it's playing everything too fast. They fall in love in two days, she makes the antidote (which was supposed to not exist, she needed time and study and all that) work in the first try, now they're facing the villain who possibly cursed him.
What's next? They'll reveal she's a witch, somehow she'll kiss him true love magic, he'll say he knew all along she was a witch, they both will defeat the dark witch, people will realise there are good witches and they'll marry??
It feels so rushed as if the author doesn't know how to build momentum, how to keep on giving some twists and turns to the plot... Idk, I don't need their romance to be a slow burn but I also don't need or want it cooked at 1000 degrees for 2 seconds.