Responses
right… they had a good flow but yeah some stuff needed to be sorted out. The ending was neat though (▰˘◡˘▰)
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right… they had a good flow but yeah some stuff needed to be sorted out. The ending was neat though (▰˘◡˘▰)
This could've been a masterpiece if they stretched out the timeline and paced it better. The premise is interesting but the execution was not great. Needed to be at least 30 to 40 chapters