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No hate, I just think its kinda crazy. i kinda want to see if this pattern continues
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No hate, I just think its kinda crazy. i kinda want to see if this pattern continues
Sometimes im reading and I'm like.... there are so many behaviors that are inconsistent with the setting. Kinda crazy.
Like they accepted jayden + thought he was a random man they didn't know FROM THAT DOMAIN despite being close knit and everyone knowing everyone setting that caused her bullying as a child. Like she's the only general store, surely it must be a small area?
Not only that like her parents 3 years ago left hair????? As a clue??? So for 3 years of wind, rain, and storm it remained just precariously perched on a branch???? It wasnt even tied, just an entire tuft of hair balancing on a thin aahhh branch. Her dad's exact robe piece 3 years ago?? Like was that a special cloth? Was he the only person in the village who owned a graybrown robe? Theres no way its so easily identifiable and unique??
It was worse at the beginning. Confusing in the middle and now it sends more solidified.
It's giving.... decided what the big plot was midway through writing the chapters. And we want this to be the plotline but how u get to each step is whatever