I'm-Shaken August 23, 2025 11:40 pm

This was 100% written by a dude, or geared toward a male audience, and I say this as a guy myself. The smut feels like the author's fetish of dominating someone and doesn't look even remotely pleasurable. Oh yeah, force your entire hand up there with absolutely no prep, that shit got her swooning for you. The smut itself also doesn't feel like it adds anything to the story other than shock or the author's blatant rape fantasy, while showing off how "cool" the lead is from how dominating she is, or how miserable Nami's life is. Let alone the absolute mess of the plot.

This isn't even the worst thing out there, like this is still better than the male-oriented het-smut slop out there, but this one just passes me off for some reason.

Responses
    I'm-Shaken August 23, 2025 11:42 pm

    *pisses me off

    Wasn't even a typo, auto correct just has it out for me

    Twinkiepharm September 6, 2025 4:01 am

    This is basically a yurified yaoi so probably

    UKEDESTROYER3000 September 27, 2025 5:26 pm

    I mean most yaois have similar plots and completely unrealistic sex scenes, while being mostly written by women. This doesn't say anything about the author's gender.

    pogotun October 10, 2025 10:56 pm

    Lol relax man. No one is forcing you to like it but shouting that the author is a man or that it's intended for a male audience is ridiculous. You have to stop this nonsense, some women write this kind of stuff and some women like this kind of content just as some men do. Everyone has their own preferences. Gender has nothing to do with writing style but you know want, let's go back to your stupid point from the beginning, you're a man so you don't know what a woman can write or has in mind. But here's a hint, read yaoi. Don't play the knight when you just look like an idiot.