This was 100% written by a dude, or geared toward a male audience, and I say this as a guy myself. The smut feels like the author's fetish of dominating someone and doesn't look even remotely pleasurable. Oh yeah, force your entire hand up there with absolutely no prep, that shit got her swooning for you. The smut itself also doesn't feel like it adds anything to the story other than shock or the author's blatant rape fantasy, while showing off how "cool" the lead is from how dominating she is, or how miserable Nami's life is. Let alone the absolute mess of the plot.
This isn't even the worst thing out there, like this is still better than the male-oriented het-smut slop out there, but this one just passes me off for some reason.
This was 100% written by a dude, or geared toward a male audience, and I say this as a guy myself. The smut feels like the author's fetish of dominating someone and doesn't look even remotely pleasurable. Oh yeah, force your entire hand up there with absolutely no prep, that shit got her swooning for you. The smut itself also doesn't feel like it adds anything to the story other than shock or the author's blatant rape fantasy, while showing off how "cool" the lead is from how dominating she is, or how miserable Nami's life is. Let alone the absolute mess of the plot.
This isn't even the worst thing out there, like this is still better than the male-oriented het-smut slop out there, but this one just passes me off for some reason.