imo it’s a pretty interesting and good plot line but i just hate when the author goes th...

ilovemydog August 28, 2025 11:12 pm

imo it’s a pretty interesting and good plot line but i just hate when the author goes the sexual route. like it’s literally out of nowhere. it would’ve been sm better if there was more built up tension b/w the mc and ml instead of them going straight into blowjobs and handjobs. don’t get me wrong, i’m all for smut, but sometimes it feels out of place and this story shows it. now the ml is just a player when it could’ve been way more interesting to see the development between him and the mc without resorting to sex like 10 chapters in.

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    asmiir_ September 2, 2025 6:09 pm

    Read the novel!! It’s really good and helps fill in the gaps you may see with the adaptation!

    I thoroughly enjoyed it. It’s a sweet angst story and Hamin just has my heart

    ilovemydog September 2, 2025 11:07 pm
    Read the novel!! It’s really good and helps fill in the gaps you may see with the adaptation! I thoroughly enjoyed it. It’s a sweet angst story and Hamin just has my heart asmiir_

    omg i will def look into it thanks for the recommendation! do u know where i can read it? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    asmiir_ September 3, 2025 12:40 am
    omg i will def look into it thanks for the recommendation! do u know where i can read it? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ ilovemydog

    https://hyacinthbloom.com/series/sweet-shot/

    ilovemydog September 3, 2025 12:47 am
    https://hyacinthbloom.com/series/sweet-shot/ asmiir_

    thank you!!

    asmiir_ September 3, 2025 1:02 am
    thank you!! ilovemydog

    I’d love to chat about it when you’re done hehe i need someone to offload all this information and theories i have