Personally I don't have an issue with the drawings, but the story is pretty dull. I keep reading it because I'm assuming that, we are at sidestory 22, it might finish in any moment, but this is by no means a super bl
I agree with you. Yes the story is not really deep, I think thats an easy read romance with not much dark side, it is not meant for a long talk about human nature or whatever, its just a romance to pass time, but there is some kind of charm to it too
Tbh I'm really thrown off by the anatomy. But this one is really not the worst haha
Ha ha ha, true, true
Ok, so i’m going to be the mean bl critic, and feel free to hate me. I do like the fluffy part of this story and the love they have for each other. The characters are well drawn for the most part (even though the author has a tendency to draw too long torso, but that is clip studio paint dolls fault for not being sometimes anatomically correct, and that is why tracing is sometimes bad if you don’t use enough references), also she has a tendency to put the sexual organs too low, but that is because the torso is not anatomically correct in the first place. Chaeheon is a very very cliché seme, borderline toxic but not enough to be really toxic. He is 17 years old but packed like a bodybuilder while doing sometimes sports (and we never get to see him doing sport, what a Lucky, very lucky hasard). He is a sex machine always ready, always has stamina, even though he works, cooks, cleans. Im feeling tired just by readind that! Always has time for his lover and is completely devoted to him. Is the female fantasy only a having a slave? Personnally if my boyfriend said yes to absolutely everything I say with a « you are so fantastic and sexy and I love you » i would find him boring. Also it would probably means that its not a boyfriend, but chat gpt. I don’t mind clichés in BL, it’s an easy shortcut for romance. For example having a poor ML would be a hassle to write because, well when you are rich you can skip the dark parts of life, that’s at least 4 chapters less to draw and write. Also if the ML were to be ugly, it would be much more work and the story would not be anymore a fluffy nice romance (probably someting more deep too but that is obviously not the goal of this manga and that’s ok) personally, and that is just my opinion, I find the bulge in the sex scene a boner killer. As well as the leg penises. The sex organs are completely out of control lol, and the characters seem a little bit « stiff » again that is because she probably uses a lot of tracing, and a lack of shadows at the contacts points, publishing 1 chapter a week does not give a drawing artist the freedom to do something more qualitative, and that’s the greedy publisher fault as well, as they want something that brings money quick. I am pretty sure (but who knows maybe I’m wrong) that fujoshis can wait if the story is good and the graphic quality follows, but we dont live in a fairy tale world. What I regret a little bit with most of the BL manga authors is that there are unskipable cliches, and there are skipable cliché, which can turn your story from a light romance to something more deep and more « adult like » but that makes the story a little bit more complex (which I personnaly like). Otherwise, it seems like Im trashing the manga, which im not. Really Im not lol. It is a very cliché romance but its sweet and its good for a light read, and the main character is nice and lovable. That’s all!