im sure the story is great, its rated 9.6, but can someone tell me if the introduction is ...

LordTrashii August 29, 2025 5:17 am

im sure the story is great, its rated 9.6, but can someone tell me if the introduction is intentionally sloppy or not bc wtf? i mean before she regressed. the mls behavior is honestly really confusing and kinda pmo

why was she locked up for so long when he claims he literally started the rebellion for her? she was already well received by other homunculi, so why did he not take her out of prison right away? its evidently been a while, considering the sister is heavily "pregnant" and id assume that experiment would have only began after he became king. so like, 6-8 months maybe? and hes kept her locked up all that time, without telling her or reassuring her she wouldnt be executed? without letting her talk to other people? without letting her work or yk bare minimum have a court case to prove that she was on the homunculi side to crush any opposition for her pardon, if there even was any? is he supposed to be portrayed like this? right now, i cant tell if hes possessive/obsessive, or just fucking stupid.

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    Bea September 1, 2025 12:18 pm

    Wait you cooked with this. Past Michael was just fucking stupid and in the 2nd TL he never had to use his brain so I hadn’t realised. Good think Eve is smart huh

    Naiwalker September 1, 2025 11:12 pm

    He might have gotten her pregnant before the rebellion since in the past he was her knight and alluded to them doing alot but did it to further his goals. Also we dont know how far along she actually is we assume its far because of how big it is but as he puts it itd an experiment nobody has ever conceived a child with a homunculus

    Naiwalker September 1, 2025 11:21 pm

    He might have gotten her pregnant before the rebellion since in the past he was her knight and alluded to them doing alot but did it to further his goals. Also we dont know how far along she actually is we assume its far because of how big it is but as he puts it itd an experiment nobody has ever conceived a child with a homunculus and we dont know what affect the philosophers stone has on her for her to even get pregnant. As for y she wasnt pardoned it wasnt like she was put in a prison cell but probs kept the others contact on her to a minimum cuz of jealousy since he wanted her to pick him but didnt want to ask that of her if she wasnt saying it on her own. If he was willing uprise and take over the throne in order to obtain her id imagine he has no quals about not wanting to release her from him even if he knows shes innocent. We see in a flashback he originally couldn't even come to terms with the fact he desired her so its no wonder it went down this route. And its not like we the reader know exactly what Rosie was to him or her treatment. So for all we know she could have been forbidden to go out as well but since she got THE homunculus king (and future king) she could have been fine being confined thinking they are in love. Even when he sends her away she can't believe he's doing this to her because of Eve. In other historical romances when there is an uprising usually causes alot of chaos and can take awhile to restore public order and it probs took even longer since we see homuculus are exclusive to royalty but even in other regions and to others were still regarded as sub human

    Bea September 2, 2025 10:09 am
    He might have gotten her pregnant before the rebellion since in the past he was her knight and alluded to them doing alot but did it to further his goals. Also we dont know how far along she actually is we assu... Naiwalker

    What you got wrong in the first sentence is that Michael said the 'baby' was a trial and it wasn’t his sperm that got her pregnant it was like on chapter 2 someone can go look up the quote I forgot what it was

    Bea September 2, 2025 10:10 am
    What you got wrong in the first sentence is that Michael said the 'baby' was a trial and it wasn’t his sperm that got her pregnant it was like on chapter 2 someone can go look up the quote I forgot what it wa... Bea

    And ugh why did you have to remind Michael was fucking her sister I feel like gagging

    Naiwalker September 2, 2025 2:24 pm
    What you got wrong in the first sentence is that Michael said the 'baby' was a trial and it wasn’t his sperm that got her pregnant it was like on chapter 2 someone can go look up the quote I forgot what it wa... Bea

    I never specified how cuz its clear Rosie is also under the misconception that its baby out of love and "his" i only said he got her pregnant just cuz it was easier to say it that way cuz thats what he did to further his goals

    Bea September 2, 2025 7:45 pm
    I never specified how cuz its clear Rosie is also under the misconception that its baby out of love and "his" i only said he got her pregnant just cuz it was easier to say it that way cuz thats what he did to f... Naiwalker

    Ok I get u