Can you spill? I'm planning to read this and still reading the comments lol
In my opinion, around the middle of the story, it really gave me the ick that the bottom was portrayed as too shameless, thinking only with his dick, while the top was seriously focused on making the bottom fall for him. Seeing the bottom just plain horny and without any emotional depth doesn’t contribute to their relationship development at all
man just read it... its funny and genuinely good... don't overthink it it just fun and silly and smutty
The bottom becomes so unlikeable in the middle of the story