Well, I actually have to agree...
I hope you can give it a chance if you ever decide to continue.
I don't think the MC actually wants the ML to fall for the og FL, it's more like she's confused and scared, cause liek why is the story detouring from the original? I'm sure she doesn't know it's her fanfic lol ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
She’s afraid to believe the ML might actually care about her, because what if she’s wrong and just misreading everything?? One of the recent chpts explains that a little
And for the ML... yeah, he’s bad at communicating, but it’s imagine trying to explain to someone that you’re falling for them while also realizing you're a character from a story in which youve died
HOWEVER, I do feel like it's being dragged on for too long ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Stopped reading at chapter 40.
The FL really confuses me, she knows the original timeline where the ML LITERALLY DIES from loving the original FL, the princess, so why on earth does she want them to meet and fall in love?
I mean i’m confused about her intentions here, she hated the original novel because the ML was killed off like he didn’t matter and even wrote a whole new novel because she hated the ending that much.
Idk she’s not coming off as smart as she thinks she is.
Also holy hell, the ML wears “I suck at communicating” across his forehead
This came off as more of a hate comment that I realised, i liked the first like 20 chapters I swear